All Comments on 'Hey, Munch!'

Loved it!

Pappasleaze!

Interesting premise.

But rushed. Really rushed.

And I don't understand multiple orgasms in his pants that were "ruined". Huh?

And nothing to/with any part of her body other than her pussy being eaten? Why?

Nothing with/to her breasts?

Neither he nor she thinks that her asshole might 'need' some tonguing?

Three stars.

Really nice. Not sure I see it as bdsm per se... but whatever, a nice story.

That's fun, and it does make me giggle :)

Hot, if not a little rushed. Love the premise though! Keep them coming

My favorite story you’ve written so far! What a lucky guy

This is really hot. Well written.

a magnificent description of how to eat a pussy: great!

5 for sure.

I appreciate descriptions of bullying champions, only if they are properly punished. Firefighter Becky and mrs Gomez are very mean against their mutual Friend, who also often served them with devotion.

Cream Pie is excellent. But if other orders can be placed in this restaurant, I would like to propose:

1) punish Becky and ms. Gomez (it is not fair to treat a friend that way).

2) grant a prequel to the five other friends: last name James (Lily, i guess), Felicia (F), David (M), Fitzgerald (F), and Smith (F).

3) develop a path for she-detective Cogburn, who after sampling Mr. Munch (now unavailable) will have to look for another eater;

4) tell us about Cassie and Jason's happy honeymoon, his slow improvements, and the techniques they use together to improve (though always adhering to the golden rules: "Only her," "Ladies first," and "Never reciprocate.").

5) if Munch ejaculates prematurely from his erect penis, why not buy a chastity device?

6) one commenter observed that there is little BDSM, at least so far.

Tell us more about these people! This cast is very effective, don't abandon these characters!