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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Give up now please

Yet again nothing new boring can’t anyone get something new already done this black guy fucks a white women with there 15 to 20 inch cock same old story but told different here’s a challenge how about writing about a colour women and a white guy cause at the moment it’s starting to get stale everyone that writes about these stories just writes the same story about a black guy and a white women it’s been done to death please change the record by the way there is such a thing of a black women just think first before writing anymore so dull this story is can’t even give any stars for this story it’s just stale black guys fuck a white women what’s new nothing just the set ups have been done to death so please try something different please

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Lame

I think this story was rather lame. Guy walks in, stick his hand down her pants and then fucks her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Some potential in this story

First, what is the woman's name? Author didn't think of that before proceeding to rest of story. Secondly, is the woman married or divorced as if married, this makes more tittilating with time of the essence as he comes home from work. Does she have a daughter perhaps 18 year old senior at high school and a racist toward black people?

Her neighbor Al, 25-30 years old, assume he rents house nearby as he is a construction man and has a friend living there, sharing the rent and construction, too. Tenting a modest house can cost $2500 per month. Add in Al's black girlfriend and it adds up for her to dominate the luscious woman and potentially daughter for conversion to BBC lifestyle while cuckolding husband.

Story can go places.

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