by Agnol
Bravo!! I really enjoy reading your stories about Hidden Acres. Keep em coming!
Get all 4 boys and their moms together for some Saturday night fun .......
I just found this story and have gone back and caught up on previous chapters. Seems like the “sleepy little town” of Hidden Acres story got off to a rocky start but it has definitely picked up momentum. Now, I can not wait to see what happens next. I’ll be looking for the next chapter. Seems that Agnol has a superb storyline to work with! Hurry with Ch.11.......
After reading this story, seems that Hidden Acres could hold many family stories. Let’s hear about the HA Country Club social events and parties such as New Years Eve, Forth of July, Founders Day where the HA way is openly practiced. The HA school staff, and students over 18, learning about the history of HA and taking part and carrying on the towns tradition. Or maybe the church pastor, his family, and the congregation, all participating in the HA way of loving. The HA Senior Citizen center with grandparents and their families can be included. Use you imagination and keep writing.
Great story. I can’t wait for Ch. 11 to see what happens next in Hidden Acres.
"It was the first time she'd ever been fucked by someone and she wasn't sure who the cock belonged to."
This sentence makes no sense and could have been left out. She has 2 children and had just had sex with her son.
Other than that I give this chapter WAY more than 5 stars.