by kinkink
Amazing! So well written, so graphic it almost felt like being there! A marvel! Thank you!
Great writing. Good slow burn, lots of detail, makes a fella slow down to enjoy all the emotion, all the sensations. This story has so much more to say. Oh and I never give 5's well except this time.
@Anonymous (Hurry up):
I'm writing as fast as my fingers and day job will let me!
Kinkink,
Take your time and get it right. Great story here. Don't rush it and screw it up.
Great story and well written! Waiting anxiously for the next chapter. I’ve got thoughts about where it should go but I don’t want to second guess you. 👏👏👏 Bravo!
Wonderful. Looking forward to many more chapters, including her sister and father making her feel very loved and valued.
Please pay no concern to the entitled shits who read your work for free and have the GALL to demand you write faster.
This is an excellent story and you should take your sweet time.
@Kiltomatic:
Thanks! It's taking me to interesting places, and I'll keep working on it as long as it does.
@kidjackass1:
I always take several passes through a chapter before posting, so hopefully none of it ends up feeling rushed. The story IS kind of making me want to write quickly, though!
@wvjet and Private 2021:
I appreciate the feedback, and I'm very happy to hear you're enjoying it.
@Anonymous (Great story and...) and Anonymous (Wonderful):
I have a pretty firm plan through chapter 4 and an idea for chapter 5 that may depend on how chapter 4 goes. Hopefully the results at least equal the ideas you have!
@lifen1:
Thanks! I mean, sometimes people do get overeager, but I always try to take it as a compliment, not rudeness. I haven't noticed anyone being what I'd call pushy. But maybe that's because I'm pushing myself pretty hard on the story anyway, so I feel like I'm in their shoes too.