All Comments on 'Hiding In Plain Sight Pt. 02'

This is good, really good writing. The descriptions are building a clear picture without becoming verbose. The characters are becoming real. The sex is exciting and erotic and not boilerplate. Don't stop until the tale is told.

It's a good start on a publishable novel. Keep up the good work! D.

5 stars

Good job balancing the story with the sex without it becoming a story that has a sex scene or a sex scene with a plot line added as an after thought.

Great story!

I am loving this story... your writing skills are amazing. Can't wait to read your next chapter... there will be a next, won't there? I truly hope you keep this story going for a long, long time!

Please this needa to be a whole story. AO3 or on here idc, I need more 🥺🥺🥺

I join the chorus begging for more.