All Comments on 'High Fashion Queen'

loved it. a part two would be geat but settled in the condo like rose suggested

Your story is either one of a gay crossdresser coming out or a straight transgirl, and I suppose it doesn't matter at this point in the story, but with the mishmash of pronouns yet the insistence that "don't worry, these two people are still totally gay guys", it makes me interested to know the future of Jesse and their relationship with Atticus... is he just in it for the genitals they have? Is Jesse gonna want to get the operation one day? How would he feel if they decided to go on hormones? Can a lover who identifies as gay even see Jesse as a girl? There is alot of potential for an interesting story here.

Loved the characterization. Enjoyed the plot developments. Sex was great without being so clinical in description as to feel detached. Wasn't confused at all. Want to read more!

That is the beauty of experimentation. You never really know who you will be attracted to. In my life I have seen many people who claimed to be sexually attracted to one realise that sexual attraction doesn't always stop love or lustful attraction. Human sexuality can be very fluid

...maybe seeing Jesse continuing his transformation? Also seeing where Rose and Sara's relationship goes. Maybe two different stories, High Fashion Queen could stay with Jesse & Atticus and Rose Sara could have their own story line... maybe overlap them from time to time. Just a few ideas. Take them or leave them.

VERY sexy story!!! As a cross dresser I would LOVE to read a sequel told from Jesse's point of view! How it felt being a girl for the first time, losing her virginity, etc... Would also love to hear about Sara using the strap on on Jesse and all three of the others pleasuring Jesse! PLEASE write more about her!

Thanks for the awesome story Melanie! But please don't tell me that this is the end of Sara and Jesse's adventures? I'd love to read more about what happens next...

I want to read more about Jesse!!! I want to hear about her feelings becoming a girl!

More Jessica and Atticus, please!!

I read Jessie's version first. Both are lovely stories.

I would love more stories in this series!! I want more of each of the couples

Hi Mel I've read what I thought was all your stuff on hear I know your on other platforms I really love this one did this happen to you