by Gina_Monsey
Very hot, well-written, and behind all the BDSM, love and trust. Keep it up!
I nearly quit the story part way through, particularly after this sentence;
"This is part of your training. If I can't have you outside the house, why should I take you outside the house?"
You made him sound like a worthless bastard, and it was seriously pissing me off. Well played though, well played. Role playing I can understand, I’m not into humiliation per se but you pulled it off with this story.
From a guy's point of view I frequently look for a women's point of view on a BDSM story.
For me I can sense a women's touch on the keys. Usually I don't read stories about the abuse of women unless it written by a women. Great very hot story.