All Comments on 'High School Dates Ch. 15'

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shadrachtshadracht12 months ago

Sexy and sweet. I only hope that the games don't end badly for him and Betsy.

monkeykinglivesmonkeykinglives12 months ago

meh. It's not that it's classified as a romance. You are working so hard on these stories, but I don't find much drama in them to hold a reader's interest. The plot and characters seem pretty flat and wooden to me. I'm not smart enough to suggest a fix.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Very sweet and romantic, outstanding storytelling, by a top-notch author.

muskyboymuskyboy12 months ago

15 chapters and still no romance......

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

A perfect way to end David's university training and his university romances. Your story gets better and better as it progresses. You've skillfully developed David's character as the quiet hero, the creative and innovative IT person and the consummate loving and caring man. Looking forward to David's continued journey through life. K

Remember Last NightRemember Last Night12 months ago

I hope this story continues!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Good story. Can't wait to see what will happen in chapter 16. I have a feeling Besty will havr sex with that at work and either end up like Mandy or she will not marry David and try to ve eith the guy at eork even if he is married. Hope when David goes back to college he will continue to screw Tina again or any other girls who helped him get over Mandy or even screw Patty's brains out again or hook up with Patty again

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