All Comments on 'High School Mystery Ch. 05'

Hopefully there’s more to come, I’ve left many reviews and never commented on grammar or punctuation, but you really need to spellcheck. 5 stars anyway, I’m not anal enough to deduct for that!!! Thanks

I'm not really into swinging or cheating, plus both Darryl and Katie's reasoning didn't really make much sense to me. I liked the story up till this chapter so I guess I'm kinda neutral on this as a whole.

there is a difference between complexity and confusion ...complexity is a conscious design that drives to an ultimate conclusion ... this story had the potential to be great but all the confusing interplay didn't seem to lead to any significant conclusion ... except for Katie and Josh, the rest just being unfortunate detritus

Had to read carefully to figure out who was doing what to whom. Problems with "lie vs. lay" (grammar) and "of" vs. "off" (typos?) were disconcerting.

Very well done series. Please write more stories.

Simply superb plot. Loved it.

Josh should have dumped that feminist head case Katie. She will make his life miserable.