by Darkhime
I'm so glad I saw a new chapter, and what a wonderful chapter this is. Thank you for continueing this story, and I can't wait to find what gonna happen to Skye in the week to come (; CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
The chapter needs some editing but it was still good. I like the story and the progress you are making but I would like the chapters to be longer. I really like hearing from Skye.
I'm already excited about the next chapter.
I'm sorry, but when I was I High School there was never anyone who got everything they wanted without anyone naysaying them. For ever rich prick there's always some poor badass with nothing to lose ready to fuck them up at the first opportunity. Everybody, even someone who "rules the school" has someone who they don't want to cross paths with. Hell, way back in the day, when we were in scholl we would put sugar in the gas tanks of every brand new Beamer in the student parking lot just to fuck with the rich kids. Adults might feel beholden to this kid's dad, but kids won't. The fact that their parents "owe" his family would likely just piss them off. So, no none of this really rings as authentic to me.
Uh this is a FRICTIONAL story??? Like what are you doing on this site if you want authenticity ?
Yessss! You're back again with another chapter! Ugh I love this story so much that I was constantly rereading it waiting for an update. Please ignore the negative comments and just know that you have written an amazing high school erotic story. It's really good and keeps getting better with every update.
Forget all the haters this story is spectacular!!
I really love this series and I was so happy that you updated. Please please please give us more. Even though I know you just updated I can't wait to read chapter 5. Please don't keep us waiting for too long!
I love non-consent and it's a great story, but proof read them. I were some misspelled words and a few sentences that didn't make sense... otherwise keep up the great work!
This is one of my favorite stories. I'm constantly checking for an update. Keep up the good work and don't leave us hanging too long please=]
I read this a while back a couldnt wait for an update please write more and ugh the locker room scene could not stop re-reading Nickolas bad boy but cute you never know what to feel about him ya hate him ya love him lol. Make more your a fucking grande writer look forward to more chapters
I was waiting for an update for this. I love it so much.
You should add a new boy in the story........a possible new love interest for Skye😱 And Nikolas would be so jealous. He would try to take his claim....but thats just a thought, I love how your story is going and I hope you continue soon. I have read this story over and over, I still get fascinated with it. I hope you can continue with it and possibly soon... I am dying from the wait.
I am literally checking in every 2nd or 3rd day to see if you have put the next part up. I can't wait for more!!!😍
I check up on this story whenever I get the chance. Please don't give up on it! You're a wonderful writer and this story is amazing!! ;)
It's been such a long time since I've seen this story I left off at chapter 3 so I was so happy when I saw 4 I just wish this could last long. So please hurry with the next chapter on wit's end. It's just so freakin GOOD!!!
Chow Bella!
I am such the "karma card player." Yeah this is good, and all; but please let her grow a spine. Those two assholes have too much liberty. I can enjoy only so much before I get tired of her debasement and feel Iike, "Okay, girl, you've been beat down enough, now stand up for yourself."
But then I have no idea where you are goin with this story, so I will have to sit my butt down and wait for the conclusion. Fingers crossed for Skye's HEA.
I really like your story and I really can't wait for more. I keep checking to see if there's a new story. Hopefully soon.
Do not give up on this story. I have been waiting on chapter 5 since the moment you came out with chapter 4. I love it, I love the story, you are an amazing writer. Please complete.
I second the recent Anon comment. With the holidays coming up, I hope you will find the time to post a chapter (: patientely waiting <3
Well chapter 5 is finished I'm in the process of typing and editing it though. I found it better if I go back to my old school ways of handwriting my stories then typing later. It should definitely be up before Christmas! Chapter 6 is in the works too
I absolutely love this story. I check up every so often hoping you'll uodate. I'm happy to see that you decided to continue it!! I'm looking forward to reading the rest!
Christmas is around the corner and looks like you're going to bestoy an early gift upon us all! Thank you so much I really liked this story and I'm excited to read the newest installment ;)
It's an hour before Christmas and still no update. What a let down
Been constantly checking your page in the hopes of an update, please put us all out of your misery and post soon!! We all miss your writing
More macho man savagery from Nick. So no surprise there but is Daniel looking to help Skye or pounce on her. Where's her mom off to so suddenly? Questions, questions and more questions.