by Darkhime
I just found this story and am really glad to have, you're very good at this.
I squealed in excitement when I saw this update! What a unexpected chapter, didn't think this chapter will go this way. I love how possessive Nick, and the threesome was done tastefully. But I'm gonna be bias and say I enjoy the 1-1 with nick more than Daniels :P, I'm sure you're just establishing a relationship with them though. Great chapter, can't wait to see more of Skye and Nick!!
I am so glad you are continuing this story. I was waiting for a new chapter.
I feel so bad for Skye and Nick's making it really hard for me to like him. And Daniel should've helped her! Neither of them deserve her but I can't wait for the next update!! Great work, as usual.
This is one of my favourite up and coming stories on this site. Love the back story with the mum, I certainly wasn't expecting that outcome! The erotic scenes left me breathless . . (to say the least ;) ) At first, I disliked the threesome scene as monogamous relationships are more of my personal preference and it isn't something I typically enjoy reading. It did prove successful in deepening the dynamics between characters and making Daniel more of a serious contender when it comes to Skye. If Daniel is to be a serious contender for Skye, I would like to see him stand up to Nick more often and display his more aggressive side. THANKYOU. THANKYOU. THANKYOU FOR COMING BACK!! I was getting greatly worried this would be another story to add in the 'amazing but never finished' category. Please, please dont make us wait too long for the next installment. You have many loyal fans here eagerly anticipating your writing. Keep up the brilliant work!! xxx
I didn't like the threesome but still like the story. I am wondering why Sky didnt go to the police if her mom is missing? And Nick needs to GET A GRIP! Keep it up though i'm glad your still writing
You should've warned there would be group sex. I liked your story until now. Group sex is a huge turn off for me.
your story is amazing don't listen to the comments write the story the way you see fit its your creation.... i liked the threesome good work can't wait for more
Wow, I loved loved loved the threesome, I hope you continue taking the story in this direction, it had every element that turns me on
Soooo good! You are definitely back! I was so hoping the story would go this way. You an an excellent writer, it will be torture waiting for the next chapter!
I squealed and practically vibrated when I saw this come across my feed. I couldn't wait to get my greedy little hands on this story. And boy did you deliver! This story is so great. I'm not sure how I feel about Daniel and Nick's weird relationship thing but if it gives Sky the love she deserves and need then I'm all for it. The mother angle was out of left field but I love it. Continue with the great work. Looking forward to the next installment. Thank you once again for this great story.
This chapter was hot hot hot! Looks like mother and daughter have very similar tastes in men. Thank you so much for updating please continue to bless us with this writing!!
Constantly checking because "the thirst is real" LOL and I'm really loving the chapter and direction it's going into this pattern that she and her mother is in. I wonder from the research he did that night and day what he has discovered or uncovered because she never told him anything as of yet. The suspense has me addicted, This new dynamic with the threesome is very intriguing. I wonder how it will all play out and I'm so looking forward to the next chapter I'm so looking forward to whatever creativity flowing out of your awesome mind! please don't stop writing if you write this into a book I would buy it in a heartbeat!! Please don't take a century or two for the next chapter even tho I would still be waiting LOL.
Nikolas is a dick. I can't believe Skye's dad kidnapped her mom, lmao. Great chapter.
Here i thought I was going to disappointed yet again by literotica users not continuing their stories, but have proven me wrong. I will be anxiously waiting to read how this story would end. Keep up the great work.
I'm so happy you finally decide to update. I was so anxious to see how things would turn out. Sorry to sound ungrateful but please update again soon. This story is literature crack. Thanks!
I've been reading chapters 1 through 4 over and over again just waiting for the day you would continue it. I am not disappointed. My only wish is that there was more but I don't mind waiting. I can't wait to read whatever happens next.
The threesome was so intense and unexpected. I love how things are quickly developing, we see a side of Skye's mom and dad that I would never have imagined! To the person with the 'WTF?' , obviously the second narrative is between Skye's parents, hence why Skye is worried her mother may be missing. Keep up the great writing!
What a story, what imagery!!!! Great story and even a greater writer. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I'm dying to know what happena next.
As always this series is so great, fantastic and I hope you update soon
You are so talented!! I know the story is suppose to be dark and dirty but damn I really want a happy ending for Skye. I'm in awe with your skills. You should write a book, I'll dig it for sure!! Please don't stop writing. All the best
I discovered the story this morning at 3 a.m. and read it until I had to go to work and then snuck off to the bathroom during work to read it some more and I finally just finished it when I got home please please please upload a new chapter soon lol you had me at hello
Sexy and degrading.... Nikolas loves her, the evil bastard jealous that she wants Daniel. I like there dynamics Daniel sweet and considerate and Nick dark and demanding. It reminds of the movie Savages with Blake Lively, I hope the three end up in some form of relationship. Love that twisted shit!!
As sick and demented as their relationship is I love it.
This has the right amount of twisted and sweet to satisfy my taste.
Love it!
I love this story so much Nic and Daniel are hot as hell and I hope you will be uploading soon.
Ok so I love this story and I was told by friend to read pls use upload more.
I love your story so far and I am impatiently waiting for chapter 6! Give me more! No pressure though lol.
This chapter is where I stop reading your story. This has gone beyond nonconsent/reluctance/consensual non consent and spiraled into straight up rape. This isn’t how you treat a sub, not by a lightyear. I couldn’t even make it all the way through the anal scene because that’s some fucked up shit dude.
Nickolas allowing Daniel to be involved intimately with Skye is not believable. His personality doesn't give way to sharing unless it's a front and he really wants nothing more than sex from Skye. Placing a story within a story is unfair unless both are conclusive in the end. What's the back story with Janine? How can she be such a strict caring mom than all but abandon her daughter out of nowhere? I found it funny that Skye chokes on a piece of bacon but can inhale a whole dick. And lastly, was there a real sex tape or did Nickolas lie about it just to manipulate Skye? Did he record the three of them together? Imma need at least 10 more chapters, thanks. Hanging with this story in hopes that Skye gets revenge or at least a happy ever after.