All Comments on 'High School Romance Ch. 04'

This was a very painful but believeable chapter. So many falsely believe that all men who have sex with men are homosexual. Some are simply violent as was Paul in this chapter. The poor little guy has suffered so extensively...please write long enough to get him to a happy and safe state!

Man this must be the week for emotionally gripping stories!! This was very real...the pain, the fear, the need for revenge was all so real. Very touching, and frightening...rape is a hard subject to deal with.

this chapter made me want to cry so much and not one of those sweet misty eyed one , but that ugly one where you make up runs. great story can't

wait for the next chapter.

POOR BABY!!!!!!!!!! Paul is such a dick!! I hope Brady rips him a new one... But looove the story :) I think this is your best one :D

Your writing is amazing PLEASE continute the story i would check back every hour for this chapter. please please please dont make me wait to long i need my Ezra fix :O

the net went down so couldnt read it when it came out, ur writting gets better and better, if possible..;)

Omg!!! I cried when I read this, your writing is awesome. I hope Paul gets his ass raped in jail, then he'll know what it feels like.

I cant believe it. Girl this chapter was TOO good! Intense! So real!

(He clutched the material of Brady's shirt in his small hand.)

ezra is a high school age young man- who plays the piano well---it's unlikely he would have small hands- good pianists have long fingers. why are you writing a story about 2 high shool guys if you insist one of them is like a tiny child- it's kinda creepy- like brady is with a child instead of a young man.

and the bit about brady's mother and step family being shamed by brady's being a bastard- shouldn't they be more shamed by the women who had pre-marital sex and gave birth to a child out of wedlock- shouldn't they be ashamed brady's mother is a whore/slut/jezebel_brady is only here because of his mother's sinful ways

I really liked it <3

It was very well put, I am a writer myself. =]

~AJ~

Let me get this straight Trevor is Brady's friend yet he was going to orally rape Ezra? What the f*ck is up with that? Over all a great story I agree with julri. :-)

Snicket,

You really can't read. He's the guy that is against the rape and getting punched by Paul. Come on now.

You really touched my feelings of anger very much, I know what it's like to be raped, abused or forced to mouth or fucked in the asshole. In Ezra's story, I see a reflection of my own experiences.

But wait a minute... I was going to write about Brady's great influence on Ezra and his love for him. Every aspect of Brady's care, affection, respect and incredible love comes from the depths of his heart, soul, thoughts, his whole body, personality. The Lockhearts are also wonderful, full of heart, loving people and especially parents not only to Ezra and now also to Brady.

Unfortunately, as you described, there will be such villains, selfish and simply evil, jealous, vindictive and not giving anything but evil, like Paul or the person who hurt Ezra in childhood.

I'm already very interested and very impatiently waiting for the next part to be able to read and experience the fate of Ezra (I grew up and loved Ezra).

Best regards from Poland from Warsaw, SissyBoy. (wawa_ursynow@o2.pl)

Naprawdę poruszyłeś bardzo moje uczucie złości, wiem sam jak to jest gdy jesteś gwałcony, wykorzystywany czy zmuszany siłą do brania do buzi, czy pieprzonym w dupkę. W losach Ezry widzę jakby odbicie swoich doświadczeń.

Ale zaraz, zaraz ... miałem napisać o wspaniałym wpływie Brady'ego na Ezrę i jego miłości do niego. Każdy aspekt opieki, uczucia, pełnego szacunku i niesamowitej miłości Brady'ego jest z głębi jego serca, duszy, myśli z jego całego ciała, osobowości. Również Państwo Lockheartem są wspaniałymi, pełnymi serca, miłości ludźmi a w szczególności rodzicami nie tylko dla Ezry a teraz i dla Brady'ego.

Niestety ale tak jak opisałeś znajdą się takie czarne charaktery, egoistyczne i po prostu złe, zazdrosne, mściwe a nie dające nic od siebie po za złem jak Paul czy osoba która skrzywdziła Ezrę w dzieciństwie.

Już jestem bardzo zainteresowany i bardzo niecierpliwie czekam na kolejną część aby móc czytać i przeżywać losy Ezry (zżyłem się i pokochałem Ezrę).

Pozdrawiam serdecznie z Polski z Warszawy, SissyBoy. (wawa_ursynow@o2.pl)