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by SoCaliDude

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Far to short needs much more details some build up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

If it weren't so rushed, it could have been a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The wrong types of details were given. There is no development of the scenes, thoughts, emotions or actions of the characters. Overall it was too rushed and the effort was minimalistic at best.

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Raised in L.A./Orange Counties. BA & AA degrees. Dodgers, Lakers, Rams fan. Divorced/teenage son.