by beyondkink
Hey, be nice!
Hmmm, a little warm on the reception.. Any tweaks for chapter two? what do people think about the dialogue? I wanted to have a nice mix.
More enjoyable in the right category and this isn't it. Belongs with the other finger-up-butt and cock-as-popsicle stories in "gay male."
My partner was not threatening but persuasive and I really loved the treatment and being all fem. for him then having my knickers pulled down to be fucked by his huge cock, then later sucked dry by him, wonderful.
I mean I'm usually the first to call out stories that are just "Gay Male" appearing here, but this definitely had the CD/sissy element so what's the problem?
I like this , a lot, I recognise the feelings described and I found it very erotic and want to read more so please write another chapter soon.
This story was an intriguing start and was overall well written and with a succinct plot. One or two typos aside i find no room for negative criticism (merely advise a second pair of eyes to proofread). The characters had good role definition without being weighted by exposition. The assertive nature of the dominant is without malice but nurturing control and i look forwards to elaboration of protocols and non-sexual control and feminization as well as high descriptive detail on the sissy's clothing and feelings of submission and sissification.
I liked your story because I want it to happen to me, at times. I know it is wrong, but I am brainwashed by reading 100's of similar stories in Literortica.
Since you wrote this, I know you will love "Giving Is Receiving: A Bottom's Story. It deals with an older man waiting what your college grad is receiving. It's a goood sexy story too.
It is knit-picking for some to say move it to another category. It is still erotic regardless of the category.
I too look forward to more of "High Society Sissy." In fact I would like to be in lingeire learning how to please a caring, well-endowed, manly man, too.
Please Sir, I want some more...
I too want to be in this delicious predicament. Xxxxx
Rebecca.
...And with the CD done by the main character, the category seems correct. I think what needs to be watched more carefully in this category is non-consent. A number of stories here lately have been very much non-consent and need to moved for that reason, but this is obviously all done consensually.