All Comments on 'Highland Magic Ch. 12'

PLEASE DON'T DISSAPOINT US AND DISSAPPEAR AGAIN BEFORE FINISHING THIS LOVELY , CLIFF HAMGER OF A TALE !

This is a good story. But I'm just wondering why its taking so long between entries. If you're having issues in your daily life maybe you should find a way to just tie it all together and end the story. There should also be more romance to the story. This is LitEROTICA.

Another good read. My only comments would be that perhaps the chapters need to be a little longer. It's such an exciting story that there's always a certain amount of disappointment when the chapter ends and it leaves you craving the next. Perhaps that's what keeps us all hanging, who knows...