by romancer
If a bear had shown up and ate them all. Pretty boring stuff.
Please finish I hate when an author starts a story then leaves the reader hanging it is just not right to if you are going to start a story then you need to finish it
On one hand I can see why people didn't care for the abrupt ending, but outside of that I think this is some well written, realistic erotica. Please continue and write Chapter 3. This was well worth my time and one of the best couples stories I have read. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
I couldn't vote more than 2 stars since this is not complete. Really need to have the other two finish their part of the action.