All Comments on 'Hiliad's Special Gift Ch. 30-32'

by Addicted2Writing

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Shysub412Shysub412over 10 years ago
Wow!!!!

Three instalments in 3 days, the lit gods are smiling on me!

Fantastic writing, great story

Another 5* to you.

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
Lol

Yet more surprises with my fav vampire and his sub

Glad I am also back to the read with the morning coffee routine again.

So much better for my constitution

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Brilliant Series

Wonderful writing and series. Look forward to more from you soon hopefully.

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedover 10 years ago

another great chapter. and i knew she was her mom. thanks so much can't wait for more :-)

inspector123inspector123over 10 years ago
Love it ...

I really enjoyed this series and will be sad to see it end. We get one more chapter right? Please say yes :-)

grrlslavegrrlslaveover 10 years ago
Outstanding!

This is such a great story and so well written. That said, i don't understand why she got in trouble for being hungry after she woke up. Isn't that to be expected and shouldn't Hiliad have been more nurturing? Also, I really don't understand why she got in trouble for attacking the man who had stolen her and tormented Hiliad. I mean the guy was assaulting her! I also thought he was already dead. Anyway, great story and I'm sooooo excited for more!

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
Inspector123

There had better be a few more chapters or I will literally have a word in the shell like of A2W....methinks she has some more surprises for us devotees yet.

Love4NorwayLove4Norwayover 10 years ago

Loved this story! Not ready for it to end!!

Addicted2WritingAddicted2Writingover 10 years agoAuthor
Comment of your comments....

...Yes! There are LOTS of chapters pending!!!! Up to 43, but I have to finish the very last bit.

I might continue the story but I can't make any promises yet!!!!

I'm glad everyone likes it...except MasterfulJim. He seems to be more worried about the darned cat Heather than he does about Hiliad or Connee! lol

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
40 bloody 3

43

Ye gods,

I had better buy shares in Nescafé

Excellent and really pleased to hear it A2W as I do love this story.

However I have reported you to the RSPCH

Poor Heather ...sob

She's going to be eaten....I know it

PS...poor old scooter too. Does he know about this extra workload ?

Addicted2WritingAddicted2Writingover 10 years agoAuthor
MasterfulJim...

... If Scooter doesn't know there's 43 he certainly does now!

RSPCH ??? "Really special People, Connie and Hiliad????????

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
Hmm

Royal Society for Protection of Cruelty to Hiliads / Heathers / Hvampires

mastersgoodslutmastersgoodslutover 10 years ago
Love this Story

I love this story. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for an excellent read.

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