by Ingenue_79
This was great fun to read. Intense and surprising action!
Nice work as usual Ingenue!
Well-written and very, very hot. I can see this developing into a very exciting series.
very nicely written as usual, good build up and the potential for this story to continue in a myriad of different directions can only be limited by u........ please do....
This was a very good strat to what could be a hot story. Would love to read further adventures
I am not usually turned on by girl-on-girl domination, but this got me good and hard. Great read, you did more in two pages than a lot of people do in ten. Nice work!