All Comments on 'Hinn Ch. 07-09'

Enjoying your approach to this and looking for more!!!!

Thanks, arrowglass - glad you're enjoying it. Chapters 10-11 are in moderation now, 12 is written and I'm well into 13. So more is coming - it just takes a little time.

Firstly, i like your story very much. I apreciate it in the sense that is is not a generic story of a djinn and a master. Rather it is an exploration of new and old concepts and how they would work. I apreciate the afterthought and the consideration that you put into the interaction, and the obvious use of your intelect in building a engaging world.

It is obvious that ray possesses an agile mind, and as he is the djinn and you the sheat, so do you.

Thanks for the compliment! Also, glad you’re enjoying it - I’ve had a lot of fun getting it this far, and having people still finding it an interesting read just heaps more fun onto the pile for me.