All Comments on 'Hinn Ch. 39-42'

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AmbisinisterAmbisinisterover 4 years ago
Too short chapters

I don't know about other readers. But I thoroughly enjoy this story and would prefer to wait a little longer between submissions if that would make your submission lengths a little longer

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Agree re too short chapters

I need to back track I have confused myself and need to reassess the continuity of this story. My fault not yours.

UsuallyPresentUsuallyPresentover 4 years agoAuthor

Ambisinister - I'm glad you're enjoying it at the least!

I'm struggling a bit with the story right now, I know where it's going, and I know the hiccups and bumps along the way, just pushing through some writer's block. Hope to keep up a mostly-weekly submission schedule, unless a bunch of others step up and ask for longer stories less frequently.

arrowglassarrowglassover 4 years ago
I really enjoy this, but agree about longer chapters!

Keep up the story please!

UsuallyPresentUsuallyPresentover 4 years agoAuthor
I guess...

...y’all want longer chapters!

OK, the next submission will take longer to come out, but will be longer too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Dead story?

That would be unfortunate...

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