by beaverhunt
So, you hired a whore.
You are sick and can't write. This is so wooden, and you can't do dialogue. People don't speak like that.
A real baby sitter would have known that 10 year olds don’t nap. The set up seems contrived, and isn’t really very realistic. The description of sex was great, just the set up needs work.
Love your story build up. Could use research for minor details to make the story more believable, but overall a good read!
If they don't like rubbers, why doesn't he get a vasectomy?? I had mine at 20 and have never regretted it. There is no change in anything, except I cannot make babies. It is reversable, just very expensive.
The girl I was fucking at the time, said my cum didn't taste much different. She jokingly asked if my cum was even less fattening.