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hot and sexy!

Absolutely SMASHING! Beautifully written. Each intense desire cascades down upon the next until the reader is filled with the same love, lust, passion, and want that you are. They are caught up in your words and can't help but ride the waves of want and feel the fire of desire build as you both ride your climaxes to their ultimate and fulfilling completions.

And just stupendous for a 1st submission.

The strength of feelings and richness of visualisation draw the reader right in, to finally drown in the depth of pathos.

Very sexy. I love this HB! Keep the stories coming:)

I found this to be both thought provoking, and emotionally provocative. You're a wonderful writer, please continue to grace us with your prose.

I love this story. You're great!!!

Bout time I checked your stuff out, HB.