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I really enjoyed this❣️ You should definitely share some more ☺️

It’s a very promising story and potentially very erotic. I have two extremes in my preferences relating to fantasies. The first is with a strong element of realism (BDSM being a favourite) and conversely the other is something so *out there* that there’s no possibility of it being achievable (sci-fi/ supernatural).

So with that in mind I found it a little hard to gauge the relationship between this D/s couple, that said she didn’t seem horrified or traumatised that he got someone else to punish her. With that in mind I decided to ignore this line; “ Terror runs through her body....” and instead opted for suspension of disbelief that his reactions were within their limits.

Just as there is a difference between *real pain* (physical/ emotional) and *erotic pain*, there is also a marked difference between *genuine terror* and *sexual fear/ apprehension*. If you feel genuine terror from a sexual partner then consider it as a massive indication that the relationship is broken.

In BDSM there’s a lot of mild sexual fear, it’s part of the thrill of BDSM, it’s caused by things like predicament bondage or the *what if*/ deliberate mindfuckery factor, not knowing what your dominant plans to do to/ with you. In a healthy relationship BOTH parties know without a doubt that the other will never deliberately harm* them. It’s healthy for both to have limits.

Yikes that dragged on longer than I intended. I really enjoyed your story and I’ll be sure to keep checking for more.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)