All Comments on 'His Annual Visit'

The sequel to "His Annual Visit" has finally been finished. You can read it right here.

"Rick's Return"

http://www.literotica.com/s/ricks-return

Very nice first foray into writing here. Tasha is a great character, easy to relate to. Please don't stop now. It seems so rare to find a first timer produce something so readable.

Since this is in the 'group sex' category, it would have been nice to have Rick join them. I guess we'll have to wait until 'next year'.

For your first story I was really impressed. More into the story and emotion then I tend towards in my writing. But that's probably more a function of the author's gender. I hope I can expect more of this fantastic work from you!

:)