All Comments on 'His Ass Is Mine'

by Zoolu75

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
This is Your First Story?

You've got a bright future on Lit!

Now that's a Woman who knows how to treat a boy. Do you happen to have her phone number?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great Story

wow what a well written nice piece. very imgainative adn I could visualize every part well. YOu truly drew a picture in my mind. I see a bright future for you. thank you for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Teachers report

Well Zoolu, that was quite something. You can really write this stuff! get out of inverts and into erotic literature. A+

AladyloverAladyloveralmost 17 years ago
Excellent

Fabulous Story, beautiful balance of teasing anticipation and descriptive erotica. Well done, hope you will write again - soon !

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow

That was something. Have you written more?

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