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All Comments on 'His Beautiful Neighbour Ch. 04'

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 14 years ago
Well done

I love this, it's been too long for this chapter (just ribbing ya).

Seriously, keep going this way.

Maybe a few bondage positions thrown in, but never the less great.

Can't wait till the next one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Excellent

I love your series, read all of them in 2 days. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Good work

I hope that james involves in his mother kike his second slave.

syd_v63syd_v63almost 14 years ago
Great Story

This is not my favourite genre at all and yet you've written a good story. Wished the Tattoo turned into more but there is always the next chapter. Just the right amount of everything. Keep up the great work onto Chapter 5 for me

pamarshallpamarshallover 11 years ago

great love a neighbour like her,gonna read rest now.

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