All Comments on 'His Best Friend Pt. 01'

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Oldergenteman69Oldergenteman69over 5 years ago
Good start

I would love to hear more of what could happen between the three of them, together maybe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A minor error

I enjoyed this and would like to see more, but you might wish to fix the error in the beginning by writing "Seb" instead of Jamie. Thanks.

KittyHallKittyHallover 5 years agoAuthor
Oops!

Good catch with the names - corrected version has been submitted. Thank you!

joefeltonjoefeltonover 5 years ago
A very good beginning, more please

Here's a suggestion. She does a strip tease dance for both men, ending with all of them masturbating in front of each other, or a circle jerk.

gator1224gator1224over 5 years ago
Love the story

What a hot start. I hope you have more to share.

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