All Comments on 'His Birthday Plaything Pt. 01'

This story is so hot! I hope I can have the next part soon!

I wrote this as a way of sorting out in my own mind what I wanted to do with my girlfriend. We broke up, not because of this or any sexual issue really, but since then I have become a little disheartened and don't know if I should continue the story.

Dont let life experiences hold you back, use them as a catylst for your writting. Next chapter due soon, better get started.

I really like your style of writing. Your development of the players is great. Cant wait to read the next chapter. Keep on writing!