All Comments on 'His Birthday Plaything Pt. 01'

I really like your style of writing. Your development of the players is great. Cant wait to read the next chapter. Keep on writing!

Dont let life experiences hold you back, use them as a catylst for your writting. Next chapter due soon, better get started.

I wrote this as a way of sorting out in my own mind what I wanted to do with my girlfriend. We broke up, not because of this or any sexual issue really, but since then I have become a little disheartened and don't know if I should continue the story.

This story is so hot! I hope I can have the next part soon!