All Comments on 'His Blackmail Ch. 05'

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mjl2010mjl2010over 16 years ago
I had a feeling

this story was leading in this direction. Somewhat contrived and barely believable, it seems like she went from plain vanilla to lascivious slave in just four meetings with Master and willing to be with other men as well. Although I suppose that since she was cheating on her husband anyway it wasn't that big a stretch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hmmmm

I agree with the previous poster, that I had a hard time believing the outcome. I guess it's the lack of real emotion involved. Does the woman not care who she is with? Will any master do? Did she or did she not develop feelings for her trainer? And agreed that she went from one extreme to the other too easily.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
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The most romantically erotic story about bdsm I've ever read. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nice

a really good story .... keep it up :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing!

This series was amazing! Very well done!

near1111near1111over 8 years ago
Great story.

I never reead SM Stories but this one is damnd well written and highly erotic. 5 stars for the hot slave sara.

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