All Comments on 'His Cousin the Babysitter'

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Frankie1952Frankie1952almost 4 years ago

Great start, gee what an understanding wife he has. Wonder if he knocked his sexy cousin up and made a baby for her.

sirhugssirhugsalmost 4 years ago
Wish this was first person narrator POV

Otherwise a very strong story. Gave it a 5.

Also, rather than Dani saying that Ellie had been staring at Zeke's cock at the family get together, I would have thought Dani seeing Zeke staring at Ellie might make more sense.

These are just quibbles.

Will Zeke and Dani share Ellie?

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