All Comments on 'His Favorite Slave'

that was a very hot story!! i hope you write more as to what the master does to his slaves!!

The only things I disliked about this story were the 89 '&s'. It would have taken you but a moment to replace them with 'ands'; it would also have meant that you got five stars rather than the four I have given your work. Thank you for a good story, but please pay more attention to small details. They are important.

Overall, quite sexy. I agree that you need to pay attention to format ("&s"). Also you need to tie up loose ends: what happened to the slaves he left behind? The ending is a bit abrupt, you would do well to pay equal attention to all parts of the story. Writing is writing, no matter what the subject.

This was good enough I would have liked to see to be much longer. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Keep up the good work!