All Comments on 'His Goddess'

by peachiekini

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SlaveNanoSlaveNanoalmost 15 years ago
Loved this

You really capture the sensations of receiving a Goddess's golden wine. The tension of the build up and that wonderful blurred line between humiliation and reward that is such a wonderful part of watersports. Nice piece of work, I really appreciated and related to it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Needs a rewrite

This was hard to get into. I usually love any female dominant stories but this one was pretty bad. A woman can't pee when she's having an orgasm. Also if the cock was fake i couldn't tell..one minute she has a pussy, then a cock and yet again back to having a pussy. Please get a proofreader.

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