All Comments on 'His Honor the Mayor'

Thank you and thank Bill for his encouragement for your writing this piece. As usual, well written with no mistakes of the grammatical kind. An engaging easy to read piece that flows well and with just enough erotic incest to belong on Literotica.

Though the subject matter (elective politics) is age old, I found the clarity and insight presented refreshing! 😉

....didn't check the grammar very carefully but I think such a smart fellow would know when to use 'discrete' or 'discreet' and 'looser' or 'loser'. An elevator going down is in 'descent'. 'Decent' means something different.

The ethical failings are Rotten's (Rahauten's).

The grammatic, spelling or word choice failings are mine. Looks like I need to double check and edit.

Love and Kisses.

Lisa Ann

A fairly well written piece with a high degree of believability to it. Those that think that there were no errors, need to have some lessons in grammar. Overall it is a nice tale of political honesty. A bit of insight with a bit of exaggeration relating to how the business world works.