by shysubmissivegirl
... worth every one of the five stars I have awarded it. Thank you once again for sharing your imagination and talent for story-spinning with us.
The sensibility and pacing of this continues to be spot on. The building of a relationship between them will be a pleasure to watch. I was amused at the chicken nuggets. So perfectly 'single guy.'
Really like how you are pacing this story, it's going to take her a while to get over this so I am glad he realizes. Glad you are not rushing the story . Thanks .
Thank you all so very much for your kind words :)
@Nicces-- thank you so very much! I appreciate both your comment and your rating, and I'm excited for you to read Ch 03 when it comes out!
@mel_pomene-- thank you so so much! I loved seeing your comment both on Ch 01 and Ch 02! They have both encouraged me to continue writing, and hope that you'll keep reading along!
@anon-- thanks for reading! I'm glad you like it, and I'm glad you're catching some of my humor in the story :) I've been working on maintaining a good level of progression between Alex and Emma, and it makes me very happy that you seem to think it's working :) drop me a line after Ch 03 posts, I'd love to see if you think it's still flowing right :)
@Mayness-- thank you for your kind words! It's been hard to work out the pacing of it all, and I'm glad that you like it so far! I'd love to hear if you think it's still working out after Ch 03 posts, so it'd be great if you'd let me know!
Thanks again to everyone for reading, voting, and commenting. Ch 03 should be up soon!
~shysubmissivegirl~
i love how the story is progressing. your pacing is perfect to me. this is one of my new favs. can't wait to see what happens next. something should definatly happen to her previous 'master'. keep up the good work.
Loved it.
I cannot wait to see where this is going.
I hope Alex and Jordon cross paths at some point.
Keep up the amazing work.