All Comments on 'His Lover & Me'

Very well written, more erotic than pornographic.

This site IS titled 'Literotica', not 'Porn for the illiterate'.

This writer is one of too few who lives up to that ideal.

My pussy aches for attention after reading this. Wish I had a man who blew that many back-to-back loads.

Well done.

Hi Isabella,

This is a well written piece. I liked your references, and how you choose to present a passage. It is sensual as well as sexual. Olivia is very believable. Her nervousness, her reluctance, her doubt about herself and the changing situation, let me see the person. I think keeping a story about sex fresh is particularly difficult. The characters are the key and Olivia pulled it off. Mark and Kate offered no surprises - this is Olivia's story. Thanks.

Isabella, you createdd a reality-- VERY difficult to do. Well done

great erotic story