All Comments on 'His Office Kitten Pt. 01'

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RTR10RTR10about 3 years ago

Great start....can't wait to read more.

DunkirkDunkirkabout 3 years ago

She needs to have him fill her pussy with as much cum as he can give her

LostBabygirl3489LostBabygirl3489about 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the love! I agree, Dunkirk. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
too short

What there is of this story is very good; it's what isn't there that is the problem: almost no introduction to the characters, not enough background or build-up to the story, a love scene that is too short, and an ending that is rather abrupt. Hopefully, the author will make good on the promise that this story is "to be continued".

SirKevinSirKevinover 2 years ago

Looking forward to the next chapter. I've had people in my life that, given the opportunity, I'd have loved to fuck like this. I appreciate that not every story needs a bunch of details, we can fill them in ourselves.

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