All Comments on 'His Sister in His Lap Ch. 02'

Look forward to the continuation of this story!

Just wow, what a stupid storyline............ seriously this is dumber than a box of rocks sinking to the bottom of the ocean with no hope of ever coming to the top. Gave it a one star because you can't vote any lower. Terrible, no continuity at all and no way of saving the story.........

Wow total disappointment for a part 2 when part one was a very good story. Very confusing in some parts of who's POV it was or who was speaking to who.

Well, THAT was disappointing! Almost a myriad of ways it could go, but it went in THAT one. Meh!

now they should be exclusive.

I gave it 5 stars and I liked it. Chapter 3 soon please?

The haters can fuck off. I thoroughly enjoyed this one.

Enjoyed the story. Looking forward to chapter 3.

Firstly, I liked your story. It was a different but interesting outlook compared to other stories here. Swinger's clubs and prostitution are a fact of life and let's face it a prostitute gets paid to have sex with numerous clients on any given night. The fact that one of them may be her brother wouldn't matter I don't think. The ending makes me think there may be one or two more chapters to this story. I certainly hope so. Finally, don't let the negative anons get to you. Just do what a lot of other writers do and delete them.

Needs serious editing. It is very hard to follow and I felt like I was left hanging in the end. All in all, not a good read.

The folks on here giving you shit can fuck right off. It was great, and I'd love to read more.

please continue

Very wholesome!

I'd love more! Their dynamic is excellent!

That was a sorry ass ending

I was kinda waiting for the action to start ....

Highly disappointing TheRedChamber!! Seemed sloppy and rushed, and way too dramatic, and it did not include the violation of Karen's ass that was seemingly promised at the end of chapter 1.