All Comments on 'His "Special" Secretary Pt. 01'

by MrPerv

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Very hard to read

I do not think you are a small white guy ? Not with the way you form your sentences. This story did not flow well at all.

MrPervMrPervabout 5 years agoAuthor

Not all white guys have English as mother tongue.

Regarding the flow & sentences, I'll be happy to read more details or suggestions.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
story

no more please

parasthegayparasthegayalmost 5 years ago
good story man

hey man its good story , like it very much

just keep it going . ilike to see what happens next :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
porn like this

Wish I could find porn with stories like this!

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