by Her11
What a story! I really want to get to know these guys. I love how you're complicating them, making the story REAL. Thank you. Looking forward to reading more and seeing how this unfolds and they BOTH grow from this. And the hot sex, too :-)
Thanks for updating! I love these two guys and their dynamic! I don’t know anything about this world but it makes sense the way Eric is presenting it. I also went back and read all the chapters of your other story and love that too. Good writing and characters. Can’t wait for more.
I hope 631smith’s concerns have been answered with this chapter. Ben is a tangle of anxiety who did not know that someone like Eric could unwind him. Eric is intuitive and patient, and the story has me hooked. This series is a pleasure to read as I wait for the next installment of Idolatria :)
My chant is “Write! Write! Write!” I can’t wait for more.
I am so excited for the next chapter. I love the way the story is flowing how raw feelings can be but love already being shown. Fab writing my dear Author.
Describing a dom/sub relationship so beautifully in a captivating story is fabulous! I agree....write, write, write, quickly!
Very well written and developing story. I enjoy your story line. 😎
I can’t believe how invested I am in this story and we’re only 2 chapters in. Not only is there’s the sexual chemistry but you’ve made a genuinely fantastic Dom, where things aren’t just rushed and the sub isn’t just expected to trust the dom at the drop of a hat. I’m loving watching their bond grow and can’t wait to read more, I really enjoyed seeing Ben’s vulnerabilities. I wish I had the patience to wait until multiple chapters were out to read them but I just cannot stop myself. I cannot wait to read the next part.
I have to know what happens between them next!!!!!
I'm loving it so far and can't wait for more. I really appreciate how you fleshed out the characters this chapter, it brought the story to the next level.
It's only 2 chapters in but it doesn't feel like that at all. And despite that there is no trace of a rush in plot, the flow is so natural. I'm totally in love. Please give us the next chapter as soon as you can!!
I hate to sound like a parrot but what you've done in such a short amount of writing really is amazing. I'm so locked into these characters and their journey together I would think I'd been reading about them for years. Well done.
I just discovered this story. I appreciate your sensitivity. I am enjoying this story.
Absolutely love your writing style. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you for sharing 🥰
I love both characters and how they seem to each have what the other is looking for in someone else. It’s nice to read Ben is slowly opening up to Eric and letting him in.
I love this story so much. Eric is so good to Ben and clearly cares about his subs. Beautiful.
It's really one of the... CUTEST bdsm stories out there. A magnetic and skilled Dom and a sub you just want to hug and protect from the meanies of the world. So rereadable. 💙
So well written and so different from most of the dom/sub stories on this site. I hope it continues in this style.