All Comments on 'His Sweet Boy Ch. 03'

I can‘t wait for the next part of this story!! Please keep going, I really want to see how it goes on and if Ben is able to finally submit.

I have to say that I am enjoying this glimpse into a new Dom/sub relationship. I am excited to see how the relationship and personal self assessment goes for both characters. It is interesting to see the relationship happen from both sides.

Thank you very much for such a wonderful story.

Keep it up, can't wait for more !

Your story is great, just the right amount to wet the appetite, please write more!

Really good story, can’t wait to read more.

I like this a lot. Keep it going.

If I had to criticize, 230 something pounds for 6'5" and buff sounds kind of low.

But that's nitpicking.

Everything about this series has been wonderful and every new chapter I fall more and more in love with the characters. I beg you to keep writing this is incredible and I can't wait for more from these two. Thank you so much!!!!!

Eric is so loving. Ben needs to give it a shot. I'm pulling for Eric to show this boy what love is. Keep up the good work. I love this story.

I so like the direction this story is taking and love the building relationship btwn Eric/Ben. Keep writing!

Love it. I need to know what happens next. Ooooo will Eric protect Ben from an aggressive dom, if Ben goes to see him and someone can't take no for an answer? I need to know.

But I do love complex characters, loving dynamics, and the eventual victory of love. And boy, do you know how to write it! Looking forward to more!

I think what I love most about this story-besides the obvious attraction of both of them-is that they are not two dimensional characters. Eric is a dom who is conflicted and is seeking tenderness; Ben is tormented by his own inner demons... the story is powerful in its unfolding because these two men are so fully human: Funny, exasperating, messy, complicated, HOT! Can't wait for the next chapter to unfold!

I seriously get so excited every time you update. I love these two. I have left comments anonymously on Chapters 1 and 2 but I joined up just so that I can comment on this story. It really touches me. I used to write online fiction and I know how the comments motivated me to update. I love the slow build of the relationship and love Ben’s brattiness and Eric’s gentleness with him. I want to know more about why Ben is the way he is. Thank you!

I look forward to your updates on this story. Please keep going. Keep going!!!

I'm loving this story ❤

You give us a taste...then a bigger bite of these two...then leave us wanting MORE!!!! Soooo...MORE PLEASE!!!

I check back daily for updates and was so excited to see a new chapter. Your writing is fantastic, I love the development in each chapter. Eric seems like a wonderful experienced Dom and it’s nice that things are going slowly so they can both really develop a connection. I also loved the sweet glimpse of them sleeping, and the vulnerability there. Please post more! X

This story keeps getting better and better. I like how the characters are developing. My only complaint is that I wish they could be longer. ☺️

So happy with this story !can't wait for more !

I like your story very much <3 I love how sweet the dom is to his sub <3 please go on like this and would be better if it's longer <3 also I hope you will finish this story and will not leave it in the middle, of course with the happy end :D <3

Oh yes, we all want more. They need more. Pretty please, may we have more? Now?

Story seems really promising. I like nice doms and inexperienced subs. :)

This has been great so far honestly loving it. Can't wait to read the next one

Another wonderful chapter. Please keep writing I'm obsessed with this story 💕

Love the slow build up, but the chapters could be a tinsy bit longer. MORE, PLEASE!!!!!

Im loving the slow buildup and characters please keep writing more !

I love the chemistry Ben and Eric have. I really hope you continue, I want to know what happens next :-)

I’m loving this story - keep checking back to see if there’s been an update yet

The slow story telling has me wanting more. This is a great story and this is how I like to feel: dominated!

I'm catching up. It's time to write more. I find the way you are developing the characters intrigues me.

I'm left in a huff. This story makes me feel all nice and fuzzy inside. I like that it's so innocent and slow and teasing and ...

Also, your details really make the story feel voluminous. Like Eric observing the mother's and kid's behaviour. Maybe punctuation could be a tad more precise, but it doesn't take much from the experience. Very nice read! Thank you!

I absolutely love this story. I actually did not want to stop and comment, because I want so badly to get on to the next chapter, and the next after that. But your request was so assertive (or was that begging) and I am submissive. My Owner and Domme is firm, assertive, and tender and calls me her "sweet boy", and your dominant character seems a lot that way. So I love the romantic tenderness, although my Owner has a "man" who is definitely an alpha Male. She taught me that I am her "boy" and trained me to love being her boy. Sorry, I get wordy.

After I finish His Sweet Boy, I will definitely try more of your stories, because I love this. It is my favorite gay D/s story on literotica. Thanks.

very good loving it!

So cuteeeee. Erick is so sweet, and Ben is so cute.

I love romantic Emotional stories. This one is really good so far. Thank You for writing it.

Awesome relationship and wonderfully written! Spoken from a writer ;)

REALLY loved how sensual this is. Tbh it even helped me be more in touch with my emotions!

I'm re reading this story. It's so good, please please please continue your stories.

I love this story so much i am so happy to have come across it

Ugh every chapter is better. More please!!

Well, they are both CUTE, that's settled.

Oh you prick teaser we need to see some dominance and submission

I keep coming back and re-reading these, I hope you'll come back with more !

Love the building relationship

Ok I commented I need more of the story….

Moto. Moto. MOTO!

I really enjoy the blossoming dynamic between Ben and Eric. I can't wait to see what happens between them next!

This author asks for comments after every story. I wonder if Her11 ever checks comments since he/she doesn't seem to be posting here anymore. Regardless, great story. I am loving it!

Love this particular story! Please, please, and please finish writing this great store!