by MSTarot
it was a good story that was a refreshing change from the norm. My only comment is proof read and spellcheck.
What a fun romp. Short and hot. Excellent work, my friend.
Loved it all. Excellent plot and fun contest read. Keep 'em coming matey!
so so good, I loved it! Are you planning to continue this or is it a one shot? I personally hope there is more to this story. Or at the very least more writing from you. Well done
This is perfect as it is, but I do wonder what happens after the curtain comes down. Thanks for sharing this with us.
I have to say, I haven't laughed this much about a piece of Erotic fiction in a long time. I am in the SCA (Atlantia) and I am a spinner so I appreciate your attention to detail on it. Love the idea of doing a Zombie Les Mis.