All Comments on 'Hit and Run'

by dontbeshy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
so hot

just a great story. i can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Pretty hot

Keep it going, good style

deepblue32deepblue32about 17 years ago
good build up

I liked the way you gradually build up to the climax of this story. It was nicely paced and well described. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
HOT!

I read this and came twice. Well written and very sexy!

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