All Comments on '"Ho-Ho-Ho, Merry Christmas...." Pt. 02'

Wonderful ending.

Your first story was good, I was happy to see a continuation, but this one went way over the top. Marcus just turned out to be an asshole. The parents thing really started to ruin the story, then the other women and getting them pregnant, even with the reset, put Marcus in a bad light, especially if he loves his sister so much and is working on Jennifer. I know, this is literotica and spank material, but sometimes more is just more, not better.

Haha, great follow up! 5/5

Buck wild

"Anonymousabout 12 hours ago

Your first story was good, I was happy to see a continuation, but...."

What I was attempting to show, and had even said (when Santa had him in limbo) was that the power he was given went to his head and turned him that way. The reset was done on him too. I try to keep my writing different and not follow the same stuff all the time, sorry it wasn't for you! :)

@Originsunknown, fair enough, overall I liked the story, and the more I thought about the story, I could see your point with the use of power. I do enjoy your stories and appreciate the time you take to write them. Thanks for sharing.

Loved the relationship between the Marcus, Clara and Jennifer. Definitely the highlight. Magic element was a really nice touch. Think Marcus went a bit wild with it (who could blame him lol). A bit jumping the shark but actually really loved the over plot and fantastical start! Look forward to seeing more and reading more from you!

Perhaps a fantastical

Halloween on in the future?!

A very well thought out, and written story.

loved it wish there was more

Great story. More chapters would be great

Great imaginative story. Ho Ho Ho, Happy Easter . . . .