All Comments on 'Hobson's Choice'

The spirit of competition and teamwork was very well-captured, Alan!

Excellent- having the "innocent" cheerleaders set the pace increased the eroticism.Lucky man!

This was a great story and I look for the next installment.

MORE MORE MORE!!!

Finish the story.. and be quick about it ;-)

Great stuff.. very well done.

Can't wait for big John to get them all at the same time. I bet Alya's next to get it in the butt.

Alan

Although now in my late 20's I can well remember the first time I saw a guy nekked! I was with a girlfriend and we all ended up having oral sex in a similar way to the way you have brilliantly described here. Dont forget girls are just as curious as guys and many of us have even stronger sex drives! Only thing is the anal sex. That is always difficult the first time with a new lover and I reckon its a mind thing as much as physical. You have to fully trust one another so I can only assume that these girls were so hyped up that the anal had to be good. OK YES, like many others I hope you're now recovered and can write the next chapter.....?

With all best wishes, Sammy

that was a great story, cant wait until i read your next!

Fabulous handling of a difficult group situation; it was very erotic. If I had one criticsm it would be the ass-fuck of a virgin, before breaking her cherry? Still...a very hot read! Thanks!

I've read quite a few erotic stories, but I've never had one with a to be continued that I was actually looking forward to read. Where is the next one?!? Fantasitic story that every guy will now dream wishing it was him.

Best story I've ever read, and thats saying something!

Great fantasy

coud have cum that many times just readin...holding out for the sequeal

I think this is truly one of the best in this category. The pace of the story had it's own part to play but the fantasy aspect was incredible. I sincerely hope to find a sequel to cover the next few days of the story.

Totally unbelievable, just didnt take me there... Sandy is to unrealistic, what sort of neurotic idiot times sex? It should be passionate and spontaneous, not set out to a timetable...

I really don't know why this story (and series) is so highly rated. The girls are plastic dolls and the sex only average. The story isn't bad, but it isn't great, either.

i VERY SELDOM READ GROUP STORIES, BUT I HAVE OBVIOUSLY BEEN MISSING SOMETHING IF THIS IS TYPICAL. THIS WAS A BEAUTIFUL EROTIC STORY THAT,STRANGELY ENOUGH, WAS ATTRACTIVE BECAUSE OF THE INNOCENCE IMBEDDED INTO IT BY THE AUTHOR. i DON'T KNOW HOW HE DID IT, BUT IT MADE THE STORY FASCINATING. CONGRATULATIONS AUTHOR. 60 year old George

loved the story. beautiful build up. enjoyed every bit. lovely theme. wish i could be in such a situation once. thanks for the story. rmshfun@yahoo.com

Who would not want to be in that cabin for the weekend? Hurry up and get another chapter? He has a box of rubbers hidden away that they find....more group demonstrations.....

Thank you for a great story. I hope the rest are as good as this one.