All Comments on 'Hockey Boy Makes Good'

This is a steaming pile of dog crap. The story line is all over the place and the sex moves so fast it is both boring and unrealistic. I feel sorry for anyone that reads this.

This isn't good enough to be crap, it's what crap decomposes into.

Train wreck. Nuff said.

I would really like to read about that too

pure crap

But in my opinion, since Gavin is blessed by birth with a fine fat prick, his own mother should be the main beneficiary of what he's got swinging between his legs. Okay, he can enjoy inferior cunts from time to time, but it's his own mother's cunt that should get slammed and pounded by his big prick and get flooded by all the warm creamy semen in her boy's loaded young balls.