All Comments on 'Hoff and Hols, a Romance Ch. 15'

One of the rare writers who can move me to both tears and make me feel warm inside. 5*****

[Why do I get a feeling of impending doom], a politician making a promise, 3 million US dollars, and a wedding Sounds like a movie title to me.

Other than the utterly perplexing opening line of the story, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. It was classic Pixie to generously forgive her mother and to acknowledge the complex dynamics of life and love. I personally couldn't summon that level of charity after learning of her mother's mercenary behavior involving Pixie's birth, but then again, I'm not cut from the same cloth as Pixie. That whole narrative gave me pause, and I went back and forth debating what was more inappropriate: the fact that inheritance was used to influence her mother's decision, or her mother's seemingly mercenary approach towards such a consequential decision. Ultimately I concluded that none of the parties covered themselves with honor. IMHO , the offer should never have been made, and once made, the offer should not have been the motivating factor in the decision. I can't imagine a world without Pixie in it, but her mother being able to make a different choice in that situation without being leveraged or persecuted is no small thing. To say I'm conflicted is putting it mildly. Beyond that ^ drama, I cheered the strengthening of Hoff and Hols bond through the birth and maternal care of Issy, as well as their intimate liaisons. I also applauded the way Keith was utterly pragmatic about "Hoff and Hols" when the option was "Chloe, her fiancé, and Hols". I would have made the same call. I was also heartened to see movement on resolving the injustice perpetrated on Emma and Pixie. How poetic that "Gran" would be the one to facilitate our star crossed lovers reunion. I have a good feeling about the future after this chapter. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

Homer sometimes nods, so, it seems, does Pixie. Apologies for the baffling opening! We are not done, yet, with the legacy, and you will have noted that Pixie’s first instinct was to tell Lady F she did not need the generous gift of the house; that instinct shows where her mind is going. The light it throws on her Mama is harsh.

I am glad you see the rekindling of Hoff and Hols as a plus, as there is much more to come/cum. The next chapter will be up tomorrow, and 17 is also submitted. I think you will be pleased at the developments, dear Anonymous xxxxx

Thank you, darling Bobbi. The tides has, sort of, turned. But there is more to come xxxxx

I agree with Anon that the chapter's first line was a bit puzzling---perhaps your typing fingers were moving faster than your imagination. But as always, a most enjoyable read, Pixie. I'm still not sure about Mama. I started the chapter thinking she should be staked down with a mouthful of garlic and I'm still wondering. After all that's gone before I'm not sure I'd trust her. As for Gran's proposed Church/State Commission, a noble cause but will it get bogged down by internal squabbling? I can imagine Archbishop Welby still dithering about it when Gabriel blows the Last Trump. All in all, yet another little triumph, Pixie, with five more stars (not really enough, methinks).

I am “waiting for the other shoe to drop” — we will see. Loved AK’s question about the dosh. Once again, you have us wound up and waiting.

Very hot words regarding Pix breastfeeding AK early in the chapter. I can't wait to see which lover Pix brings to her mother's wedding. Mama will be so jealous of AK or Emma when she sees that she is far from the most revered female figure in her offspring's life.

Once again, this chapter is a mixture of joy, sadness, and intrigue. Is there such a category as "Lesbian Romcom Eroto-mystery"? Because you, dear Pixie, would own it for sure! :)

I do feel for the Pixie character in this story and the hole in her heart that is Emma. But it is nice she has AK to lean on... and suckle on. And in the face of the sadness and joy comes the intrigue: Pixie's inheritance and the motivations of her mother / Gran. It would be fantastic to think that her mum has turned over a new leaf (thanks to Gran) and to believe their intentions are pure regarding how they are now treating Pixie. I suppose we will have to wait and see whether Pixie ends up three million richer, and whether Gran truly helps her make inroads regarding the acceptance of non-hetero Church leaders. And of course I can't wait to discover how it plays out. :)

Thank you darling Maonaigh - as for the first line, what can I say other than sorry? I am glad though that you enjoyed it. Pixie's Mama is still, as you say, someone upon whom the jury is out, but Pixie is taking a Christian attitude.

On the Commission, no plot spoilers, but yes, politics is not going to be easy xxx

Thank you, Migbird, there is, as you can seem more to come - there will be fresh chapters up tomorrow and Thursday xxxxx

Thank you, Anonymous, I am glad you enjoyed the breast-feeding - there is more to come xxxxx

Really enjoying this series Pixie. Please keep them coming, your writing is fantastic xx

Thank you darling OneAuthor, I am so glad you are enjoying this, and it is lovely to have you with me on the journey. xxxxx

Thank you Shampoofet, so glad you are enjoying the series. There is another up today xxxxx

I have a confession to make ...

I already read the next chapter before taking time to comment on this one. But now I went back, savoring the goodness.

For a while now, I have the impression that women feel about their breasts in similar ways as guys feel about their - you know, size matters.

But it is all self-consciousness. True lovers like each other just the way they are. All that matters is the response to erotic touch. Plus the possibility that some life-giving fluid may come out of it.

It is good that Keith is relaxed and supportive of AK and Pixie's relationship. It is also good that he can freely admit that he wants to watch them. But the best is that he does not get frustrated by the impossibility of it, that he respects Pixie's boundaries. This makes his love and lust for her special.

But then again, Pixie, you do let us watch. You let us into your world of love between women. By reading your story, we feel no longer excluded. Thank you for that.

It is never too late for love. Even an estranged mother can find her way into the heart of her daughter. Because that daughter's heart is always open.

Therefore I must also accept the possibility that a conservative politician can be a good man who intends to set things right. And even a greedy capitalist can do some good. Thanks, Jeff (and your 200 million customers) for helping to make Pixie's material life easier.

@Maonaigh 😉

Online writing, especially on a touch screen, with autocorrect and autocomplete and swiping, makes us all more prone to typos. Some are charming - I love kickerless Pixie.

Sometimes this technology makes us produce seemingly incomprehensible content, unless we spot the hidden message.

I don't mind Pixie telling me "you suck" right in my face. Because sometimes I do.

I greatly prefer Pixie's typos to those of others, which can in extreme cases lead to a racehorse being named "Coveve".

Which brings me to Gabriel blowing the last Trump. Which Trump would that be? Barron?

Another great story and fantastic read, Pixie

All seems to be going well with Pixie at this stage, but is it “too well” and is there one or more twists yet to come in the subsequent chapters??

Looking forward to reading what happens next

I'll be brief as I am not the best of writers. I have loved the whole story so far and I still have to read Chapter 16. Thank you for touching my senses which have ranged from anger all the way through to pure lust. Love AK xxx

Darling Amadeus, as always, I await your comments with bated breath, and am so happy that you approve. You may see in some areas the influence of a certain pianist, and all for the best. Thank you xxxxx

Giggles at your second rather lovely comment, darling Amadeus. If only there were only one last trump xxxx

Thank you so much, Wiz - and we shall soon see how it goes with our heroine xxxxx

My darling AK, I am so glad that you are following - and loving xxxxx

Okay, two cups of tea and two long, long walks.

First, on the suckling ones baby and it affects... well … ummm * blushing … clears throat * Yes, well moving on.

One of the challenges parents face is creating and maintaining the personal space where the parents' private lives are separated from the lives of the children. As they grow, children themselves face the challenge of accepting that parents do have personal lives that are not the prevue of the children. Sometimes this understanding comes with significant discomfort. However, the character Pixie handled that question with a level of maturity that is worthy of awe.

As an author, PixieHoff ascribes to Pixie's character a level of Christian maturity through her treatment of those attacking and persecuting her and those in authority who failed to support her. That level of Christian understanding has always been rare but is depicted here gloriously.

Being a Christian is not an easy thing. Christ calls upon us to forgive ALL insults against us. We have glimpsed Pixie's ability to forgive through her forgiveness of those who threatened her, and now, we see forgiveness demonstrated in her personal life through her forgiveness of her unloving mother. The latter ultimately failed in what should have been a relationship of unbounded love and support. Yet, Pixie found it within herself to forgive without expectation of recompense, but to simply forgive.

I find myself ashamed. PixieHoff, you shame me as a Christian. I know you did not intend to, but you forced me to realize an ugly truth in a few lines. PixieHoff, I have never allowed myself even to consider forgiveness. I have never let the thought cross my mind. For my oldest daughter's sake and example, as well as an example to my youngest daughter:

Mother, I forgive you.

Thank you, Pixie.

Thank you, MamaS - to forgive is to invite forgiveness, just as to judge invites judgement - you are a good and loving wife and mother, that is a lot in this vale of tears - big hugs and thanks xxxxxx

Judging others is the most common way of comparing them with our own blindsided views on life ...... So even judging parents is wrong, we can tolerate must accept and not let be their actiings ..... Take pixie , even after such harmful 21 years she is able to forgive or may open a door ...... We all are not saints but yeah some experience are brutal hard painful in physical and soulful hindsight ...... So hopefully pixie will have her hallelujah and some wonderful moments and smiles out of this little flashlight after the tragical years

Lady Pixiehoff your talent and feel for your magic pen is extraordinary, thank you sharing this masterpiece in all

Aww, Franziska, thank you so much xxxxx