All Comments on 'Hog Roast'

by JuanaSalsa

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madmax2010madmax2010almost 3 years ago

Can't wait to read more!

FredPervyFredPervyalmost 3 years ago
Strangely erotic!

I really enjoyed this one.

Not my usual type of story but it had... something... that kept me reading.

I'll have to check out your other writings.

I do hope Pearl has a few more adventures! :D

plastilinnplastilinnalmost 3 years ago

I really like this story.

Bullrider14Bullrider14almost 3 years ago

Please keep this storyline going

SubmissiveCelesteSubmissiveCelestealmost 3 years ago

Sexy and well written. I loved that Pearl had so many dimensions. She was vulnerable, but strong. Sexy but insecure. She was real.

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 2 years ago

Very imaginative, good narrative voice. 5 stars!

yowseryowserover 2 years ago

Salacious sweet

Oh this is a lovely little chocolate tucked away in the back of the box, suitable for keeping in reserve on your bedside table. Preposterous premise, sultry descriptions, sensuous in the best way, well paced entertainment and arousal of the first order.

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'It was probably something I'd regret ever being associated with.'

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Usually means the start of a good tale.

shakespear008shakespear008over 2 years ago

Interesting cross between a 'standard' humiliation story where the girl is used vs. one where she is in control... but just a bit. I agree with the other posters, makes her more human.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Needs to give a better tip!

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 2 years ago

I just re-read this and 3 months later enjoyed it even more than the first time. Mui caliente!!!!

BiggaluteBiggaluteover 2 years ago

First story of yours I've read, a very enjoyable, well written, sexy story. I look forward to reading the rest.

EarlyMorningLightEarlyMorningLightalmost 2 years ago

Just gave this a re-read. Still deliciously hot, transgressive, and funny, with fantastic characterizations and dialogue. I want to see Pearl: The Movie.

TheGraduate88TheGraduate88over 1 year ago

((smiles)) Just EXCELLENT! So glad I'm following you. So glad to have a writer who seems to understand that women are SUPPOSED to be soft and round.

cat833942cat833942about 1 year ago

That is really quite different, and I really quite enjoyed it. It feels a little lacking, but I don't know why, I cannot put my finger on it, but there are more parts to follow, so looking forward to seeing where this goes! At this point though, having read so much for so long, seeing something quite different done so well really is nice :)

Ravey19Ravey195 months ago

Good. I'll see where it goes.

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