All Comments on 'Holding Out'

Nicely done. I enjoyed that immensely. You might proof-read your next offering though. There were two or three irritating inconsistencies which nagged needlessly (pulling-up panties which had only been pushed aside, undiscussed 'no-touching' rule which had been discussed, for example).

All in all though, a dang good read. Thanks for that.

You are a gifted writer. I sure hope that you continue to put first time stories into Lite Erotica.

Good premise.

But sex is soooooo rushed.

Three stars.

Fantastic