All Comments on 'Holiday Incident as Wives go Bi'

Fisting is a big turn on, I would love to watch

I do hope we get read about that ‘idea’ you’ve left us hanging on ;) Great story, really enjoyed it, thank you for sharing

I hope that idea is to get tested. And I don't mean covid. STD test.

Awesome story. Came hard while reading it. More please

Wrong section ... honestly do you trully believe that story should be in lesbian section?

This is a wonderful little story. If I had one New Years wish it would be that you describe the face sitting in greater detail. I want to know exactly what filthy words Jayne/Jane said, and how it made our protagonist feel, moment by moment. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

For a lesbian story, there is an awful lot of penises and semen in it.

I second SiteNonSite’s request for Jane/Jayne's foul words.

This is definitely a hot little number and I will definitely read over your other stories.

This could have been a hot story, but I find the dialogue quite contrived as the numerous typos distracted the reader.

This story is definitely in the correct section. I loved the way their physical relationship built. Agree with both requests for more of the build up through their verbal exchanges and better knowing their emotional build up as well. Great story to read. Ready to experience more of the relational development.

Great